And is this it?
Can this be all?
Silently screaming-
Torn in two
I need to wait-
Wait this out;
It's going to end;
Soon... right?
Just help me--
Just help.
Thats all.
All I really need
But now I look.
I look,
And I see-
It's all so very clear
I can't forget,
But I just-
just won't remember.
All that pain
It clings to me;
Burrowing in.
Inseparable.
It's part of me
Will there be...
A new arrival-
A new part-
My completion?
Pain must flee;
Flushed out-
Replaced
From now on
Love sits in
But will...
Will it stay?
(Please stay)
Yet there's more-
Love fights love;
for that part.
Can both be?
One from the past-
Yet I can't see
If it's wrong.
Or my future
And is this it?
Can this be all?
Silently screaming-
Torn in two...
Wednesday, May 28, 2008
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2 comments:
phenomenal! the lack of rhyme is more than made up for by the deep choice of words and the meaning of the poem. the repetition also adds some depth. very nice joe!
I like this one. I think i know what you are thinking when writing this but i'll leave that to u
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